Photo 1: I think this is a decent document photo. If I were to change anything I think I would adjust the white balance here to reduce the redness of the photo. I think that the color really detracts here along with the hard shadows. Maybe moving the light to direct on would be best here.
Photo 2: This one is pretty cool with the all blue light. I would up the exposure just a bit. I think some other angles to explore would be to move closer to the motherboard and shoot up at the subject while they are working, very similar to the angle that you shot of yourself in the last section.
Photo 3: I really like this as a photo. I think that you captured the essence of the project here with this photo because its very clear that your subject is a golfer. The red club provides good contrast with the ground and I also like that the subject has the red line on their shoes. I wish the ground allowed you to shoot up more and remove just the smaller section of grass, but I also understand youre not going to dig a hole to take a photograph. Good shot.
Hey Audrey, commenting here to crit your photos:
ReplyDeletePhoto 1:
I think this is a decent document photo. If I were to change anything I think I would adjust the white balance here to reduce the redness of the photo. I think that the color really detracts here along with the hard shadows. Maybe moving the light to direct on would be best here.
Photo 2:
This one is pretty cool with the all blue light. I would up the exposure just a bit. I think some other angles to explore would be to move closer to the motherboard and shoot up at the subject while they are working, very similar to the angle that you shot of yourself in the last section.
Photo 3:
I really like this as a photo. I think that you captured the essence of the project here with this photo because its very clear that your subject is a golfer. The red club provides good contrast with the ground and I also like that the subject has the red line on their shoes. I wish the ground allowed you to shoot up more and remove just the smaller section of grass, but I also understand youre not going to dig a hole to take a photograph. Good shot.