Photo 1: I think this is a great document photo. The lighting is really good and creates a vignette around you and really highlights your hair and eyes on the right side of your face. The only thing I may adjust here is adding some exposure compensation to bring up the blacks on the left side of your face.
Photo 2: Interesting environental photo that really shows the creative aspect side of your personality. For some reason this picture gives me imagery of something youd see in a Simone Giertz video. I think you hit it out of the park here with the variable lighting and the imagery of the scene. I may boost the blacks in post here but thats about it.
Photo 3: Looks like youre a jack of all trades! I think this is a decent photo, and is definitely the most difficult in the set to pull off. I struggled with this because what really qualifies as symbolism. I think that you could do a lot with this trumpet here, and just looking at the subjects, I think I may take this to an abbey road style of photo where you could be walking with it holding it on a crosswalk (going to a show), or maybe even putting it back in the case with the case half shut (putting it down, etc). With this photo in specific, I would add some exposure, and potnentially adjust the vividness of the colors to really make the gold on the trumpet pop.
Hey Audrey, commenting here to crit your photos:
ReplyDeletePhoto 1:
I think this is a great document photo. The lighting is really good and creates a vignette around you and really highlights your hair and eyes on the right side of your face. The only thing I may adjust here is adding some exposure compensation to bring up the blacks on the left side of your face.
Photo 2:
Interesting environental photo that really shows the creative aspect side of your personality. For some reason this picture gives me imagery of something youd see in a Simone Giertz video. I think you hit it out of the park here with the variable lighting and the imagery of the scene. I may boost the blacks in post here but thats about it.
Photo 3:
Looks like youre a jack of all trades! I think this is a decent photo, and is definitely the most difficult in the set to pull off. I struggled with this because what really qualifies as symbolism. I think that you could do a lot with this trumpet here, and just looking at the subjects, I think I may take this to an abbey road style of photo where you could be walking with it holding it on a crosswalk (going to a show), or maybe even putting it back in the case with the case half shut (putting it down, etc). With this photo in specific, I would add some exposure, and potnentially adjust the vividness of the colors to really make the gold on the trumpet pop.
Great job on all of these.