Hi Audrey! You did a great job for your final sequenece! I feel like with each image a story is being told as we look through them. I also feel with the the bottom two pictures a mood is being potrayed. The second to last showing how focused she is and the last picture being happy! I also like how you don't have a lot of repeating photos of your mom doing the same thing and that every picture is something different, it makes your sequence better! I really like the picture of your mom putting the tray into the oven and the picture you took over her shoulder while shes cutting food. I like the angle that you went for and think you could have maybe done a few more shots like that! An example would be when she's cracking the egg into the bowl, it would be cool to maybe get a little closer and try to get a picture of the egg falling into the bowl as she cracks it. My only other suggestion would be on your 5th photo it seems a little dark. Other than that you did a great job and I love how your sequence came together!
Hi Audrey! You did a great job for your final sequenece! I feel like with each image a story is being told as we look through them. I also feel with the the bottom two pictures a mood is being potrayed. The second to last showing how focused she is and the last picture being happy! I also like how you don't have a lot of repeating photos of your mom doing the same thing and that every picture is something different, it makes your sequence better! I really like the picture of your mom putting the tray into the oven and the picture you took over her shoulder while shes cutting food. I like the angle that you went for and think you could have maybe done a few more shots like that! An example would be when she's cracking the egg into the bowl, it would be cool to maybe get a little closer and try to get a picture of the egg falling into the bowl as she cracks it. My only other suggestion would be on your 5th photo it seems a little dark. Other than that you did a great job and I love how your sequence came together!
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